Wednesday, November 18, 2009

SMOKE

SMOKE

I can't enter
the sky high mind
of a crow or eagle

but I know
how it feels
in cold-wet air

I have lived
breathless winter
in the open

and no star woke up
to clean the smoke
I slowly became


--R.K.SINGH





3 comments:

Ram Krishna Singh said...

Hi eda: it's nice of you to visit my blogs and offer your comments but it would be nicer if you could write in English.
All the best
R K

Hallie J. said...

hi
i think your writing is great
if you're interested you could visit my blog
www.promisexme.blogger.com
btw, can't we add friends on blogger?
Hallie

Ram Krishna Singh said...

Thanks Hallie J for stopping by my blog and commenting on it.
I too found your blog very readable.
HAPPY NEW YEAR
R K